CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WANTED PLEASE!!!!?
ive had and idea for a book floating around in my head for a book so here is some if it. It has not been edited yet.
Moonlit
Hundreds of people in ebony,blood red, and midnight blue stood
Very good, need to work on speech,and I have a feeling of Twilight.
I'm currently working on something too ,maybe we could figure out something together.
Email me: devonnba4193@aol.com
